Wednesday, December 6, 2023

poetry form week 97 , haiku...humor week 103


haiku, with 5 7 5 syllabus, which is cool



        hatsu shigure saru mo komino o hoshige nari[15]

Translated: sample 1

the first cold shower
even the monkey seems to want
a little coat of straw



sample #2, 5 7 5


the last hard notes

perhaps the moon will find a smile

some assumed layer of analysis

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